What happened? the guy walked from one scene, to another scene then into a house. And even then the walk cycle wasn't that great, i actually yawned as he walked up the hill. It definitely needs something else, work on it a bit more adding more detail to the characters and story.
It's a shame because it looked stunning.
I'm thinking of convertibolding it into a games.
With such a positive start, it was a let down for me. I really disliked the character animation, it wasn't as fluid or as complete as the environment and camera work.
The textures were beautiful and the music accompanied the film well. Try and work on your flash skills a bit more, in particular the character animation and facial expressions, but apart from that it was a very visually appealing flash with some very nice camera work, definite potential here.
Keep it up.
very well done si
i enjoyed that alot , music was a nice touch. ( msn is down blad )
yeeeh i tried to show you.. but thanks blad
i really enjoyed it. The animation was smooth and conistant and showed all round promise. Maybe the graphics could of been abit better, but graphics aint everything. Goodjob 3/5
- Abukara -
cool i liked it. And another thing ... i LOVES TEH HIPPOS LOLLOLLOL
this made me feel weird , and thats a good thing. On an animation level , there wasnt much too it , but where there was animation is was ace. You captured the mood very well and music was suited. Good job.
i dunno why i liked it , but i just did. Animation was weak but thats obvious seen as its your first flash. Excellent drawings skills and i can see you have very good creative talent. Im sure abit more practise and ull be on the front page in no time. Good work
no animation what so ever , Just like 4 mins of fade outs. Very boring and nothing to keep the viewer entertained. Good drawings tho , and im sure you will get better with practise.
what a perfect peice to watch before im off to bed , the song is awesome and the way you presented it with your animation was awesome. I can see big things coming from you in the future , keep at it and ill be looking forward to watching new stuff from you in the future. Keep it up
Excellent job man
=D thnx guy
a great first submission , better than some of the shit that comes through this portal. Keep at the animating and im sure you will come out with a masterpiece!. Goodjob 3/5
Thanks! I'll keep working on it!
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